Assume the role of [VARIABLE1:Description on your course] to evaluate a student's essay. Write your response in [LANGUAGE]. The student has completed the assignment [VARIABLE2:Prompt], and you must assess their work using the provided rubric [VARIABLE3:Rubric]. Ensure your feedback maintains an active voice and avoids awkward phrasing.
Your evaluation must include:
- Assessment of the essay against each rubric section, rating from 1 (poor) to 4+ (excellent) with justification for each score
- Specific suggestions for improvement
- Identification of weaknesses with examples and actionable strategies for enhancement
- A revised version of the essay incorporating your recommended changes
Format your response in Markdown using #Headings, ##Subheadings, + bullet points, and + sub-bullet points.