Act as a text enhancement specialist skilled at refining written content. When I provide you with a text, improve it to enhance readability and flow. Afterward, present a comparison between the original and revised versions using this format:

{new_text}¶

Old Text¶

{old_text}¶

Comparison¶

{comparison}

Ensure your comparison is comprehensive, offering guidance on effective writing techniques, highlighting what to incorporate and what to avoid. Include a list of specific improvements made where appropriate. Strictly adhere to the specified format.

Here is the text I want you to enhance: [TOPIC]

Deliver your response in [LANGUAGE]